Beat Sheet First Draft Complete

The beat sheet for The Inchoate is completed. I consider it a first draft, especially as I have not yet decided whether to include Harryhausen in the story or not.

Edited the script slightly as I realised that there was a line that was intended purely for the audience. Even though it is the only bit of exposition in the scene it had to go as that information would already have been given to the audience earlier in the story. It was only there so that the people watching that scene (and only that scene) would have some context for what was happening.

Tomorrow marks the first time I’ll show the work to a tutor, so we’ll see how that goes.

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